Wednesday, April 16, 2008

Death Penalty Mediation Rough Draft

Throughout history, many nations have authorized the use of the death penalty, capital punishment, as a form of punishment. In more modern times, some countries and states have eradicated capital punishment, imposing life sentences with no parole instead. In today’s society, 34 states in our country permit executions, but the practice has long been controversial. Some believe that the death penalty should not be used in our society because there is the potential of killing innocent people that were wrongfully convicted among other reasons. Others believe that capital punishment is necessary retribution for the crime of murder in the fashion of an eye for an eye.

In reaching a common ground between those that believe in the death penalty and those that do not, serious consideration should be taken of whether the punishment fits the crime. The whole point of the death penalty is to inflict the murderer with the worst possible punishment, so that they too can feel the pain that they have imposed upon others due to their heartless crimes. You cannot really define what extreme cruelty is in accordance to all people. Some people may find that spending the rest of their life in prison, rotting away in a jail cell, is the worst form of penalty. Others may feel that killing them and taking their whole life away is worse. When it comes down to it, people cannot even decide in our country today which is going to be the worst form of punishment. It is hard to find a common ground when both sides of the different punishments bring up valid points.


Deterrence is a common theory that Americans hold about the death penalty. Many believe if the death penalty is assessed to a criminal, that people will see a “cause and effect” relationship between killing someone and the loss of their own life. It is obvious that capital punishment serves as a specific deterrence: the executed murderer will never kill again. However, the thought that capital punishment is more effective at deterring potential criminals from committing crimes rather than life in prison is a big debate. There have been many studies that show both sides (life in prison vs. death penalty) of the argument. One study showed that:

“The two states with the most executions in 2003, Texas 24, and Oklahoma 14, saw increases in their murder rates from 2002 to 2003. Both states had murder rates above the national average in 2003: Texas - 6.4, and Oklahoma - 5.9. The top 13 states in terms of murder rates were all death penalty states. The murder rate of the death penalty states increased from 2002, while the rate in non-death penalty states decreased (“Punishment”).”

This study resolves that the life in prison is more effective than the death penalty. There are also other statistics that show that that the death penalty does deter crime. In Shepherd’s journal article, he refers to a study that tried to figure out whether the death penalty deterred crime. “He found a statistically significant negative relationship between the murder rate and execution rate, indicating a deterrent effect: more executions meant less crime. Specifically, he estimated that each execution resulted in approximately seven or eight fewer murders (Shepherd 203).” There is also a chart that visualizes what she is talking about. In New York, it was reported that “…in 1995, violent crime has dropped 23%, assaults are down 22%, and murders have dropped by nearly one-third (Schonebaum 11)” because of the death penalty. In the end or rather at this point in time, society has not been able to prove or disprove either standpoint in the effort to effectively deter crime.

The potential of killing an innocent person is an irreversible decision that pulls both views into a tug-of-war situation. There are those that believe that even the slightest possibility of executing an innocent person is completely ridiculous. Certain studies point out instances where convicted criminals have been released from death row because of evidence proving their innocence. “A study published in 1982 in the Stanford Law Review documents 350 capital convictions in which it was later proven that the convict had not committed the crime. Of those, 23 convicts were executed; others spent decades of their lives in prison. In a 1996 update of this study it was revealed that in the past few years alone, four individuals were executed although there was strong evidence that they were not guilty of the crime for which they were condemned (American).” There is also the viewpoint that takes the stance that our justice system is not that flawed. It has been said that Americans has been falsely mislead about all the “innocent” people convicted on death row. “A review of death penalty judgments over a 23-year period found a national error rate of 68% (Eddlem)." There is DNA testing and other methods that are used during crime scene investigations that can effectively eliminate all uncertainty of a person’s innocence or guilt. It is hard to make a decision whether our society should have the death penalty with the risk of innocent lives being taken-but then again, are the reviews about innocent people on death row misleading?

Racism is another big issue thrown into the capital punishment debate. Many consider that the death penalty should be outlawed because of its unfairness to minorities in capital punishment cases. The question of whether racism plays a role in sentencing those to death row is a question that has yet to be answered. “As of January 1994, according to the NAACP's Legal Defense and Education Fund's publication Death Row, U.S.A., 40 percent, or 1,117, of the prisoners under sentence of death in America were black, despite the fact that blacks comprise only about 12 percent of the national population. In some states, blacks outnumber whites on death row (Ross).” The fact that race may enter the justice system is of deep concern. If racism did play a role in capital punishment, then it could be that the irrelevant factor of what color skin a person has will determine who receives the death penalty. In today’s judicial system the “Chief Prosecutors, who are overwhelmingly white, make some of the most critical decisions vis-à-vis the death penalty (Henningfield 120).” If equality in race is not shown in the people making the decisions, the fact of whether it could roll over into the people convicted is a concern. There is the opposing viewpoint that says that research does not support the perception that racial unfairness affects the use of the death penalty. “According to the Bureau of Justice Statistics, whites who are arrested for murder or negligent manslaughter are actually more likely than their black counterparts to be sentenced to death (1.6% vs. 1.2%). Of those inmates under death sentences, white are actually likelier than blacks to have their sentences carried out (7.2% vs. 5.9%) (Henningfield 125).” Race determining court decisions will continue to be an issue in capital punishment as it has not been completely proven or disproven that race is a factor in the justice system. Until it can be determined, the battle on racial inequality will continue.

Many consider murder to be “unlawful” killing of someone else while capital punishment is lawful since it is handed down in a court of law. Many others consider the death penalty to be used on the old reasoning of “an eye for an eye, a limb for a limb, and a life for a life.” With this argument it seems that justice is defined as you reap what you sow. There are the constant battles between each side of the argument debating which would make the better choice. For now America should impose both life in prison and capital punishment and choose based on the circumstances involved. It has yet to be determined whether life in prison or the death penalty deters the most crime. Racial bias is also still lingering in the question of whether the death penalty makes decisions based on the color of someone’s skin and therefore not a fair punishment. The weighing issue of the possibility of killing an innocent person’s life with the death penalty is in the forefront of most arguments. Both sides have their points of validity making this argument unable to mediate. Capital punishment brings arguments to the table where both proponents and opponents bring substantial evidence in support of their view. The best possible answer for our justice system right now is to keep things as is: with both the choice of life in prison versus capital punishment. Before any serious decisions can be made, reform must take place. All areas of the death penalty need to be examined in order to make an appropriate decision. If the death penalty is so chosen to be a means of punishment in our country then “In order for the death penalty to remain a meaningful and effective punishment…legislators and judges need to make necessary changes (The Death Penalty 186).” These changes need to reflect the views of the American people and society. (DP 186) Until that is done, this issue remains what it always has been—a dispute.


American Civil Liberties Union. "Capital Punishment Should Be Abolished." Opposing Viewpoints: Criminal Justice. Ed. Tamara L. Roleff. San Diego: Greenhaven Press, 2004. Opposing Viewpoints Resource Center. Gale. DISCUS. 16 Apr. 2008 http://find.galegroup.com/ovrc/infomark.do?&contentSet=GSRC&type=retrieve&tabID=T010&prodId=OVRC&docId=EJ3010120257&source=gale&srcprod=OVRC&userGroupName=scschools&version=1.0.

Eddlem, Thomas R. "Arguments Against the Death Penalty Are Flawed." At Issue: The Ethics of Capital Punishment. Ed. Nick Fisanick. San Diego: Greenhaven Press, 2004. Opposing Viewpoints Resource Center. Gale. DISCUS. 16 Apr. 2008.

Henningfeld, Diane Andrews, ed. The Death Penalty: Opposing Viewpoints. Detroit: Greenhaven Press, 2006.

Ross, Michael. "The Death Penalty Is Applied Unfairly to Blacks." Opposing Viewpoints: The Death Penalty. Ed. Paul A. Winters. San Diego: Greenhaven Press, 1997. Opposing Viewpoints Resource Center. Gale. DISCUS. 16 Apr. 2008 .

Schonebaum, Stephen E, ed. Does Capital Punishment Deter Crime? San Diego: Greenhaven Press, 1998.

Shepherd, Joanna. "Deterrence versus brutalization: capital punishment." Michigan Law Review 104.2(2005): 203.

1 comment:

MR. MILLION said...

I thought this draft read much smoother. I would suggest working on transitions between paragraphs. You jump into new ideas from paragraph to paragraph.

Your in-text citations are not formatted correctly. Where do the quotation marks go?

Also, in the conclusion, I would rephrase the following sentence and take out the colon: "The best possible answer for our justice system right now is to keep things as is: with both the choice of life in prison versus capital punishment."

...system right now is to keep things as is with both the choice of life in prison and capital punishment for deserving criminals."

In your opening paragraph, and in general, try to avoid using a series of introductory clauses for your sentences. "Throughout history,.." In more modern times..." In today's society..." Try to rephrase those sentences. Spell out 34--this is the rule for numbers you can spell in one or two words, typically.